Lollapalooza
It was a lollapalooza from last week
that landed like a left hook
and left me slack jawed and listless
kneeling there like a lump.
That haymaker haunts me
in the here and now,
uses my yesterday lie
like a bonecrusher to the ribs.
We are four-dimensioned men
boxing over time.
Old Gang rumbles with New Gang,
running riot through soul’s inner city –
and one of them to the death.
Old Gang is pitiful
but he still packs a powerful punch
rising up in my inner vision
like muhammed ali out for blood.
I don’t think I’ll stand
much longer.
Sixty two rounds we’ve gone now.
I long for the bell
that signals some respite.
Every jab I make is weaker
than the jab before.
If I’m to win this fight
it won’t be me that wins it.
It will be he that loses.
I can last longer, that’s all.
I can last long enough.
He towers,
takes off his glove
looking for that final KO
this time.
But stand I will.
One more time.
His desperation steels me.
I set my jaw,
glare back into his glare.
Not one of my bones is broken.
Tags: boxing, Christian, fight, old self vs new self, poem, poetry, religion, spiritual warfare
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April 5, 2013 at 4:25 pm
Was it your Birthday? That’s what this makes me think of. Anyway, whatever it pertains it is well written and vivid. π
April 5, 2013 at 4:48 pm
Thank you, And it is almost my birthday though I hadn’t made the connection. I was actually thinking about sanctification and what a failure I am.
April 5, 2013 at 6:14 pm
Be encouraged.
Sanctification is a life long process! Know one is perfect. I will be praying for you though…as if it is heavy on your heart, as I know my own failures often are, then prayer is the best thing I can do for you.
Phileo,
Estelle
April 5, 2013 at 6:51 pm
Very true, and thank you. Though I have no fear of being a failure. As long as God is not a failure, it is enough.
April 10, 2013 at 2:25 am
I think we both know that God is never a failure!!! π
April 5, 2013 at 7:26 pm
I like the boxing metaphor..
April 6, 2013 at 2:51 am
I particularly like the last line … a reference to Psalm 34:20, a verse of special significance in my life This poem, to me is a wonderful metaphor of the fight of faith. Well done!
April 6, 2013 at 12:37 pm
Thank you. Sometimes I don’t even know what my poems are about until I hit the last line and it all comes into focus.
April 6, 2013 at 3:03 am
Fighting the good fight. I reckon we’ll all win – though the trophy might not be what some of us might be expecting.
Peace, Eric
April 6, 2013 at 12:35 pm
Amen to that. Thanks for coming Eric.
April 13, 2013 at 9:02 pm
I like this poem, especially the alliteration in the first verse.
April 13, 2013 at 9:46 pm
Thank you, Judith. Nice of you to drop by. I am up to chapter 4 of your novel and enjoying it a lot.